The University of Wisconsin System has a holistic admissions process that includes two personal statements. The first of the essay questions asks the following:
The University values an educational environment that provides all members of the campus community with opportunities to grow and develop intellectually, personally, culturally and socially. In order to give us a more complete picture of you as an individual, please tell us about the particular life experiences, perspectives, talents, commitments and/or interests you will bring to our campus. In other words, how will your presence enrich our community?The question is refreshing in its directness, for, in truth, it is asking what every college admissions essay asks -- How will you "enrich our community?" Colleges want more than students with good grades and high test scores; they also want students who will contribute to campus life in a positive way. Before you write your essay or take part in a college interview, you'd be wise to figure out your own answer to the question. What is it that you will contribute? Why will the college be a better place because of your presence? Think about your hobbies, your sense of humor, your quirks, your academic passions... all of the features that make you you.
Each of the six options on the Common Application is really getting at this very issue. Whether you are writing about a person who influenced you, a risk you have taken, an important event in your life, or diversity -- a good essay shows that you bring to campus the type of passion and personality that will enrich the college community.
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